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For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue you membership. Write a letter to the club secretary.

For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue you membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. 27aj
Dear Sir/Madam I have been a member of ABC Club for a year now. I am please to be part of this reputed institution with inspiring history. The purpose of writing this letter today is to inform you about cancellation of my membership. Being an aquintance of ABC Club was a long time dream. I persued my dream and became a general member of this club last year but I am going to relocate because of my job posting. It will no longer be possible to participate in programs and enjoy services available in the club. Hence, I would like to cancel my membership starting end of this month. I Look forward to hearing from you on further actions to be taken for a gentle transition. Yours Sincerely, P B
Dear Sir/Madam

I have been a member of ABC
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Club
for a year
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
to be part of this reputed institution with inspiring history. The purpose of writing this letter
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
is to inform you about cancellation of my membership.

Being an
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aquintance
of ABC
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Club
was a long time dream. I
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persued
my dream and became a general member of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
last year
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I am going to relocate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of my job posting. It will no longer be possible to participate in programs and enjoy services available in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
.
Hence
, I would like to cancel my membership starting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this month.

I Look forward to hearing from you on
further
actions to
be taken
for a gentle transition.

Yours
Sincerely
,

P B
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IELTS letter For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue you membership. Write a letter to the club secretary.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
129 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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