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For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue you membership. Write a letter to the club secretary.

For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue you membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. 27aj

Dear Sir/Madam I have been a member of ABC Club for a year now. I am please to be part of this reputed institution with inspiring history. The purpose of writing this letter today is to inform you about cancellation of my membership. Being an aquintance of ABC Club was a long time dream. I persued my dream and became a general member of this club last year but I am going to relocate because of my job posting. It will no longer be possible to participate in programs and enjoy services available in the club. Hence, I would like to cancel my membership starting end of this month. I Look forward to hearing from you on further actions to be taken for a gentle transition. Yours Sincerely, P B

Dear Sir/Madam

I have been a member of ABC You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
Club
 for a year This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 to be part of this reputed institution with inspiring history. The purpose of writing this letter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 is to inform you about cancellation of my membership.

Being an Possible spelling mistake found.acquaintancequittance
aquintance
 of ABC You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
Club
 was a long time dream. I Possible spelling mistake found.pursuedperusedper sued
persued
 my dream and became a general member of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 last year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am going to relocate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my job posting. It will no longer be possible to participate in programs and enjoy services available in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
. Hence
, I would like to cancel my membership starting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this month.

I Look forward to hearing from you on further
 actions to be taken
 for a gentle transition.

Yours Sincerely
,

P B

IELTS letter For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue you membership. Write a letter to the club secretary.

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

129 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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