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Dear Sir/Madam, It was my pleasure and rather sheer luck to be able to get myself enrolled in such a wonderful cookery school. Initially I was a bit hesitant to join your school as I didn’t hear much about it before, keeping my fingers crossed I took the step to join your school. Within 2-3 days the notation about the school completely changed. The so called chefs there are not only chefs but proved to be great teachers and rather greater mentors, helping me in every step of the learning ladder. I would like to mention that during my 6 months course, there was not even a single day I felt left out. One or the other chefs were there to help me out with the difficulties I faced as a beginner, giving me tips and tricks to make the work more easier and smoother. Eventhough everyday was a challenge in itself but the ease with which the chefs and my teammates supported me was commendable. Post my course I am now happily venturing out the recipes I have learnt but with a little twist. Everyday I make one or the other recipes and give my friends and family to try. Lastly I would like to suggest that the school should offer some short term weekend courses for working professionals and some advance workshops for students trained from the school. Regards, Tarun Sethi

Dear Sir/Madam,

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 advance workshops for students trained from the school.

Regards,

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