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hello there, john I received your email and apologize for not responding sooner. I've recently had a lot of deadlines to complete, yet I now have more free time than before. Do you trouble with your creativity? I thought I might be able to assist you with your lack of imagination in some way. The first suggestion in this advice is to try to reinvent yourself a little. Many individuals nowadays assume that by following the broad principles laid out to work, they can be successful without the need for pointless innovation. That is entirely incorrect. We can't keep repeating a boring approach once we've found an idea to do; we need a new breakthrough. The second thing I believe would really benefit you is to focus more on your talents; creativity only truly ceases when you cease to attempt. A person who works without a purpose or a goal in mind will never succeed. So, never give up your efforts and always pursue your objectives and ambitions. Finally, I wish you the best of luck.
hello
there, john

I received your email and apologize for not responding sooner. I've recently had
a lot of
deadlines to complete,
yet
I
now
have more free time than
before
. Do you trouble with your creativity? I
thought
I might be able to assist you with your lack of imagination in
some
way. The
first
suggestion in this advice is to try to reinvent yourself a
little
.
Many
individuals nowadays assume that by following the broad principles laid out to work, they can be successful without the need for pointless innovation.
That is
entirely
incorrect. We can't
keep
repeating a boring approach once we've found an
idea
to do; we need a new breakthrough. The second thing I believe would
really
benefit you
is
to focus more on your talents; creativity
only
truly
ceases when you cease to attempt. A person who works without a purpose or a goal in mind will never succeed.
So
, never give up your efforts and always pursue your objectives and ambitions.
Finally
, I wish you the best of luck.
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IELTS letter email for your friends and pre

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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