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Letter to a friend that you cant visit her place

Letter to a friend that you cant visit her place VQwEA
Dear Alice, I got your letter yesterday. Thank you for your invitation. It's really generous offer to put me up in your place in Tokyo. Unfortunately, i won't able to come due to my hectic work schedule. I have started a new job at Benet Memorial school as a chemistry teacher since February. As you know that, this is the time before summer holidays. So i would prepare the question paper for the exams ahead. Do you remember Alice? she is my tutor now. I think it would be better to meet some other time. Summer vacation would be more suitable time for both of us. I have been thinking about Medarma beach and some of cuisines in your place since my first visit in your place. I am sure that we will have fun. Convey my regards to your parents. I hope to hearing from you soon. CheersYours Sincerely Anna.
Dear Alice, I
got
your letter yesterday. Thank you for your invitation. It's
really
generous offer to put me up in your place in Tokyo. Unfortunately,
i
won't able to
come
due to my hectic work schedule. I have
started
a new job at Benet Memorial school as a chemistry teacher since February. As you know that, this is the time
before
summer holidays.
So
i
would prepare the question paper for the exams ahead. Do you remember Alice?
she
is my tutor
now
. I
think
it would be better to
meet
some
other time. Summer vacation would be more suitable time for both of us. I have been thinking about
Medarma
beach and
some of cuisines
in your place since my
first
visit in your place. I am sure that we will have fun. Convey my regards to your parents. I hope to hearing from you
soon
.

CheersYours
Sincerely
Anna.
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend that you cant visit her place

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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