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Letter to a friend that you cant visit her place

Letter to a friend that you cant visit her place VQwEA

Dear Alice, I got your letter yesterday. Thank you for your invitation. It's really generous offer to put me up in your place in Tokyo. Unfortunately, i won't able to come due to my hectic work schedule. I have started a new job at Benet Memorial school as a chemistry teacher since February. As you know that, this is the time before summer holidays. So i would prepare the question paper for the exams ahead. Do you remember Alice? she is my tutor now. I think it would be better to meet some other time. Summer vacation would be more suitable time for both of us. I have been thinking about Medarma beach and some of cuisines in your place since my first visit in your place. I am sure that we will have fun. Convey my regards to your parents. I hope to hearing from you soon. CheersYours Sincerely Anna.

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CheersYours
Sincerely
 Anna. 