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Letter to a friend that you cant visit her place

Letter to a friend that you cant visit her place VQwEA
Dear Alice, I got your letter yesterday. Thank you for your invitation. It's really generous offer to put me up in your place in Tokyo. Unfortunately, i won't able to come due to my hectic work schedule. I have started a new job at Benet Memorial school as a chemistry teacher since February. As you know that, this is the time before summer holidays. So i would prepare the question paper for the exams ahead. Do you remember Alice? she is my tutor now. I think it would be better to meet some other time. Summer vacation would be more suitable time for both of us. I have been thinking about Medarma beach and some of cuisines in your place since my first visit in your place. I am sure that we will have fun. Convey my regards to your parents. I hope to hearing from you soon. CheersYours Sincerely Anna.
Dear Alice, I
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got
your letter yesterday. Thank you for your invitation. It's
really
generous offer to put me up in your place in Tokyo. Unfortunately,
Did you mean "I"?
i
won't able to
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come
due to my hectic work schedule. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
a new job at Benet Memorial school as a chemistry teacher since February. As you know that, this is the time
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before
summer holidays.
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So
Did you mean "I"?
i
would prepare the question paper for the exams ahead. Do you remember Alice?
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she
is my tutor
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now
. I
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think
it would be better to
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meet
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some
other time. Summer vacation would be more suitable time for both of us. I have been thinking about
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Medarma
beach and
After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the cuisines") or simply say "some cuisines".
some of cuisines
in your place since my
first
visit in your place. I am sure that we will have fun. Convey my regards to your parents. I hope to hearing from you
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soon
.

Possible spelling mistake found.
CheersYours
Sincerely
Anna.

IELTS letter Letter to a friend that you cant visit her place

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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