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explain about our cafeteria that I have eaten

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Hi Mr. Smith I am writing this letter to you, to explain about our cafeteria that I have eaten lunch there and I have some proposals about this place. Thankfully, this place is my favorite venue to eat lunch. Not only is there a serene cafeteria but also for having a tasty cuisins, and Likewise for the heathy foods, This palce has a adequate space for numerous pupils. I would like to tell you about some slightly and minor problems that exsist there, and it is better to resolve them. First, the menu has not variety type of foods therefore we do not have many option to select. Second, The light of this area is not enough. I have some proposals that will cause some improvements, if you apply those to the cafeteria. If you add some Indian cuisins in your daily foods we will have many new options. Secondly, by creating some new windows in the walls the lights of this place are inproving. I hope my suggestions would be useful and you can improve your services by apply those in your cafeteria. yours sinserely, Amin Marghzari

Hi Mr. Smith

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explain
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I hope my suggestions would be useful and you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 your services by apply those in your cafeteria.

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yours
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sinserely
,

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Marghzari