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You have devided to applay for the job advertised above.Write your application, stating clearly why you think you are suitable for the job.

You have devided to applay for the job advertised above. Write your application, stating clearly why you think you are suitable for the job. q0jad
Dear Sir, I am writing to the position of weekend job as a tour guide, as advertised in last week's Guardian newspaper on 9 th December. As outlined in my CV which I have enclosed, I grafuated from the University of Foreign Languages in 2004 in Tashkent. After graduating the Universty, I worked as a foreign language teacher at local school for 3 years. In tose years I obtained some certificates which depend on my career like CEFR, TFT. Currently, I eork at Language Learning Centre as a mentor. Furthemore, I have been learning history as my hobby since my school times. As far as I know tjis position requires background knowledge about history. So, I believe that I am well-suited candidate for the outlined position. I enclised my CV, photograph, phone number and I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ann Heathway.
Dear Sir, I am writing to the position of weekend job as a tour guide, as advertised in last week's Guardian newspaper on
9 th
December. As outlined in my CV which I have enclosed, I
grafuated
from the University of Foreign Languages in 2004 in Tashkent. After graduating the
Universty
, I worked as a foreign language teacher at local school for 3 years. In
tose
years I obtained
some
certificates which depend on my career like CEFR, TFT.
Currently
, I
eork
at Language Learning
Centre
as a mentor.
Furthemore
, I have been learning history as my hobby since my school times.
As
far as I know
tjis
position requires background knowledge about history.
So
, I believe that I
am well-suited
candidate for the outlined position. I
enclised
my CV, photograph, phone number and I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. I look forward to hearing from you
soon
. Yours
faithfully
, Ann
Heathway
.
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IELTS letter You have devided to applay for the job advertised above. Write your application, stating clearly why you think you are suitable for the job.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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