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Dear Lund and coursera I’m Eva Y. , some time i used name Of Cameron, due to Cameron is my partner also. I’m a lecture at visual communication design in Department find art and Design in Indonesia Art Istitute. Before i’m being the lecture, i never imagine that i need to write every time as posible in academic. A sure that In my life before, i tend to make a picture more often than writing, due to drawing a picture more easier than writing. However, today i realisase that writing is one of essential part for my carrier at university. So that way, i push my self to learn how to good in writing and try to write every thing that i know, while my friend in my faculty try to avoid the subject. They more confortable if faculty not demanding them to writing. Most lecture in my department tend avoid the writing projects, It really hard for us, when we doing writing that we don’t undertand about the method, hence we usual to drawing picture in previous education. In the first time, i tried to write essay in Indonesia language for my promotion, but it is not going smoothly. I was rejected by several journals except Google scholar and my blog in internet. So that way i’m not confident to writing before i know the method and try to learn more about writing in academic writing.
Dear
Lund
and
coursera


I’m Eva Y.
,
some
time
i
used
name Of Cameron, due to Cameron is my partner
also
. I’m a lecture at visual communication design in Department find art and Design in Indonesia Art
Istitute
.
Before
i’m
being the lecture,
i
never imagine that
i
need to write every time as
posible
in academic. A sure that In my life
before
,
i
tend to
make
a picture more
often
than
writing
, due to drawing a picture
more easier
than writing.

However
,
today
i
realisase
that
writing
is one of essential part for my carrier at university.
So
that way,
i
push my self to learn how to
good
in
writing
and try to write every thing that
i
know, while my friend in my faculty try to avoid the subject. They more
confortable
if faculty not demanding them to writing.

Most lecture in my department tend avoid the
writing
projects,
It
really
hard
for us, when we doing
writing
that we don’t
undertand
about the method,
hence
we usual
to drawing picture in previous education. In the
first
time,
i
tried to write essay in Indonesia language for my promotion,
but
it is not going
smoothly
. I
was rejected
by several journals except
Google scholar
and my blog in internet.
So
that way
i’m
not confident to
writing
before
i
know the method and try to learn more about
writing
in academic
writing
.
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