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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing this letter with regard to your advertisement for help needed in your home for few hours a day next summer. My name is Ganeshkumar and I would like to apply for this job. I have completed a diploma in housekeeping course and having an experience in helping at home. During this holiday, I was helping an old age women to buy her groceries, cleaning her house and taking care of her grand children. Same way, I could be helpful for you in getting food items, making home clean and tide. Additionally, I have driving license and I can help you in driving you to places you have it in your daily routine. Reason I am interested in taking this job is due to the fact that I have theoretical knowledge of housekeeping and getting this experience will sharpen my skill. I am planning to take crash course on Master's in Housekeeping during this summer, so I would be available between 4 PM - 8 PM. I look forward to hear from you. Yours Sincerely, GaneshKumar
Dear Mrs Barrett,

I am writing this letter with regard to your advertisement for
help
needed in your home for few hours a day
next
summer. My name is
Ganeshkumar
and I would like to apply for this job.

I have completed a diploma in housekeeping course and having an experience in helping at home. During this holiday, I was helping an
old
age women to
buy
her groceries, cleaning her
house
and taking care of her grand children. Same way, I could be helpful for you in getting food items, making home clean and tide.
Additionally
, I have driving license and I can
help
you in driving you to places you have it in your daily routine.

Reason I
am interested
in taking this job is due to the fact that I have theoretical knowledge of housekeeping and getting this experience will sharpen my
skill
.

I am planning to take crash course on Master's in Housekeeping during this summer,
so
I would be available between 4 PM
-
8 PM.

I look forward
to hear
from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

GaneshKumar
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IELTS letter english speaking women seeking help

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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