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You are going to have a party. You would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home

You are going to have a party. You would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home 1AYpL
Dear Joy, Hope you are doing well and all are going according to you in your life. As you are aware that I was rigorously preparing for NASA exam as an Associate Engineer. Finally, I have reached the ladder of success. Contrary to it I’m throwing a commemorate event am inviting you to it. I am planning a short party this coming 25th of November, it’s been long time since we meet. However, it will be get-together since all our schoolmates and graduation mates are going to join us at the event. Although you are busy with your hectic work schedule, I’m expecting your attendance at the eve. As you aware that I had recently shifted my house to Dubai Internet city. It’s quite easy to reach, once you get down from airport take a cab guide him to k-24 mall, since there take a u turn and then left. Anyhow I’m going to share the Google coordinates of my house. Hoping to you see you soon at the gathering. Lots of love, Nice
Dear Joy,

Hope you are doing well and all are going according to you in your life. As you are aware that I was
rigorously
preparing for NASA exam as an Associate Engineer.
Finally
, I have reached the ladder of success. Contrary to it I’m throwing
a commemorate
event
am
inviting you to it.

I am planning a short party this coming 25th of November, it’s been long time since we
meet
.
However
, it will be
get
-together since all our schoolmates and graduation mates are going to
join
us at the
event
. Although you are busy with your hectic work schedule, I’m expecting your attendance at the eve.
As
you aware that I had recently shifted my
house
to Dubai Internet city. It’s quite easy to reach, once you
get
down from airport take a cab guide him to k-24 mall, since there take
a
u turn and then
left
.
Anyhow
I’m going to share the Google coordinates of my
house
.

Hoping to you
see
you
soon
at the gathering.

Lots of
love
,

Nice
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IELTS letter You are going to have a party. You would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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