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letter to a friend to help for getting a getting a part time job abroad

letter to a friend to help for getting a getting a part time job abroad aleod

Dear Annie, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to share my student visa approval. Finally, I got my process done after one refusal. I enrolled in Oxford University for the MBA Program. The University provides 2-years courses with a post-study visa which allows students to get a job. I have selected this program as its high in demand globally. Its all motivating join Oxford University and enhance my skills and knowledge in the administration area. I would like to get a part-time job, Projects, books, stationery expenses can easily be covered by an evening job. As you are the local of the area it is easy for you to give a referral and help me in getting a job which can cover all my small expenses as mentioned earlier. I look forward to meeting you. Best wishes,

Dear Annie,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to share my student visa approval. Finally
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my process done after one refusal. I enrolled in Oxford University for the MBA Program. The University provides 2-years courses with a post-study visa which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
allows
 students to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a job. I have selected this program as its high in demand globally.

Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?It'sIt is
Its
 all motivating This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 Oxford University and enhance my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and knowledge in the administration area. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a part-time job, Projects, books, stationery expenses can easily
be covered
 by an evening job.

As you are the local of the area it is easy for you to give a referral and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in getting a job which can cover all my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 expenses as mentioned earlier.

I look forward to meeting you.

Best wishes, 