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Letter to request for information

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Dera Sir, I am writing this letter to request for further information about your advert on a senior marketting expert position in your company. I came across this job advert in a brochure which I got from a former colleague and I would be pleased to apply. I will like to know what the specific requirements for the offer are in order to apply. Also I will apprecaite if I could learn about the added advantages this position offers in terms of housing and accomodation facilities. I am a holder of Doctor in Philosopy diploma in marketting strategies obtained at McGill university and full-time university lecturer at the nearby Higher Institute of Management of Montreal. I have 15 years of solid experience working as chief marketting strategist for several similar companies in the healthcare industry. I can also display a plethora of leadership skills especially with teams such as conflict resolution, resilience building, creativity stimulation, group coaching just to name a few. I have honned my skills through participation at worldwide conferences on digital marketting in healthcare and top-level article publishing. I would really be please to be part of your illustrous institution. Could you please provide more detailed information about your job offer. i am looking foward to your reply. Your faithfully, John Smith

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