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Requesting to work in Spain office for six months

Requesting to work in Spain office for six months pKolw

Dear Manager, I have been having some issues due to my personal problem for last one year. I was wondering to change my day today activities as lot of memories keep haunting me. Therefore I’m requesting you to arrange me a way to work in our company’s head office in Spain for six months. Thanks to the technology I can manage the the work and attend to all the meetings while I’m in Spain. And also it would be a good opportunity for me to watch and learn how our Spain team is attending to the critical customer calls and resolve the issues. As you are my reporting manager, it would be great if you could help me on this request by considering my contribution to the company for last 7 years. Looking forward to hearing from you on this soon. Yours Sincerely, isuru

Dear Manager,

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Yours Sincerely
,

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