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The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it. Ewk1b
Dear Landllord, I am writing this letter in order to complaint you about the defects that I found after the repair work of appartment. First of all, floor is broken on the corners in living room as well as in the walcony. Moreover, front door strat jamming sometime while closing or opening and I have to push too hard to close it. As you may get to know that I am facing problem with these defects in the appartment, I suggest you to please send flooring guy in the house, so that he can fix the floor of the corners and also urgently try to find someone to fix door lock jamming as it is very serious problem beacuse I have to go out for work and it is very important that lock should be working fine. At the end, I would like you to bring new lock for the front door, so that this problem do not happen again in the future. Moving further, I think you should come to the appartment when you have a time and take a look at flooring as it not good at all. Regards, Rajveer Singh
Dear
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Landllord
,

I am writing this letter in order to complaint you about the defects that I found after the repair work of
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appartment
.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, floor
is broken
on the corners in living room
as well
as in the
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walcony
.
Moreover
, front door
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strat
jamming sometime while closing or opening and I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
push too
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to close it.

As you may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to know that I am facing problem with these defects in the
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appartment
, I suggest you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
flooring guy in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
,
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so
that he can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
the floor of the corners and
also
urgently
try to find someone to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
door lock jamming as it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
serious problem
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beacuse
I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go out for work and it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
that lock should be working fine.

At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
, I would like you to bring new lock for the front door,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
The verb 'do' is plural. Did you mean: "this problem does"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
this problem do
not happen again in the future. Moving
further
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the
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appartment
when you have a time and take a look at flooring as
It seems that a verb is missing.
it
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at all.

Regards,

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Rajveer
Singh
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IELTS letter The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

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  American English
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192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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