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English language course starts next week, you have problems, describe problems, when you can join

English language course starts next week, you have problems, describe problems, when you can join ldDK1

Dear Ms. Flannigan, I am writing with regard to the English language course, and I would like to inform you that I will not be able to join on its commencement date. As you know, the course kicks off early next week, but due to some health issues, it would be difficult for me to commute to the school location. Last week, I was at the hospital performing the annual check up when I discovered that I have diabeties type 2, so the I was advised to redo the blood test again and check the sugar levels, if it was high I must consult a general practitioner next week to get some medications. Therefore, I wanted to ask if I can join the course after 10 days of its starting date. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and please do not hesitate to contact me to discuss further. yours sincerely, Amr Masoud

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please
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.

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