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English language course starts next week, you have problems, describe problems, when you can join

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Dear Ms. Flannigan, I am writing with regard to the English language course, and I would like to inform you that I will not be able to join on its commencement date. As you know, the course kicks off early next week, but due to some health issues, it would be difficult for me to commute to the school location. Last week, I was at the hospital performing the annual check up when I discovered that I have diabeties type 2, so the I was advised to redo the blood test again and check the sugar levels, if it was high I must consult a general practitioner next week to get some medications. Therefore, I wanted to ask if I can join the course after 10 days of its starting date. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and please do not hesitate to contact me to discuss further. yours sincerely, Amr Masoud
Dear Ms.
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Flannigan
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I am writing with regard to the English language course, and I would like to inform you that I will not be able to
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join
on its commencement date.

As you know, the course kicks off early
next
week,
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but
due to
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some
health issues, it would be difficult for me to commute to the school location.

Last week, I was at the hospital performing the annual
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check
up when I discovered that I have
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diabeties
type 2,
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so
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the I
was advised
to redo the blood
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test
again and
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check
the sugar levels, if it was high I
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must
consult a general practitioner
next
week to
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get
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some
medications.

Therefore
, I wanted to ask if I can
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join
the course after 10 days of its starting date.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
, and
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please
do not hesitate to contact me to discuss
further
.

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yours
sincerely
,

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Amr
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Masoud
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IELTS letter English language course starts next week, you have problems, describe problems, when you can join

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8 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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