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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer 5rOQ
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regards about the room were I lived. I have a roommate Jessa, we share all the amenities and appliances. We have been together for quiet period of time. Every night she calls her friends and family and it is so noisy. It is find hard for me due to the fact that I cannot focus on my studies and I cannot sleep well because of this problem. However, If you have another vacant room. I would prefer a single bed since I can afford it. From my present room we share from outlets to kitchen. I would prefer to live alone. Hoping for your kind and consideration. Thank you. I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter. Yours sincerely, Aubrey Alia
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you with regards about the room
Did you mean "where" or "we"?
were
I
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lived
. I have a roommate
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Jessa
, we share all the amenities and appliances. We have been together for quiet period of time. Every night she calls her friends and family and it is
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so
noisy. It is find
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
for me due to the fact that I cannot focus on my studies and I cannot sleep well
because of this
problem.

However
, If you have another vacant room. I would prefer a single bed since I can afford it. From my present room we share from outlets to kitchen. I would prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
alone. Hoping for your kind and consideration.

Thank you. I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter.

Yours
sincerely
, Aubrey
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Alia
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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  American English
5 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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