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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer 5rOQ

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regards about the room were I lived. I have a roommate Jessa, we share all the amenities and appliances. We have been together for quiet period of time. Every night she calls her friends and family and it is so noisy. It is find hard for me due to the fact that I cannot focus on my studies and I cannot sleep well because of this problem. However, If you have another vacant room. I would prefer a single bed since I can afford it. From my present room we share from outlets to kitchen. I would prefer to live alone. Hoping for your kind and consideration. Thank you. I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter. Yours sincerely, Aubrey Alia

Dear Sir or Madam,

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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

131 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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