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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take 8bEx

Dear sir, I am currently studying a part-time course Business Communications at your institute. I have started this course in the month of September. The reason why I had enrolled in this course was that being a Management graduate I wanted to enhance my Business Communication skills. I am currently working as an Assistant Sales Manager. My job requires me to travel extensively and with the erratic timings, I have not been able to get the time to attend the classes plus do the required assignments. I tried very hard to manage my job but was not able to. It affected both my health and my job. As I have paid the fees in full, I would like to request if I could start this course at a later date. Kindly let me know what will be the procedure for this to happen. If there is any other option that you have in mind I would love to know your suggestion. Looking forward to your cooperation. Yours sincerely, Vaddireddy Pavani.

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started
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course
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course
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get
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 to know your suggestion. Looking forward to your cooperation.

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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter

American English

2 paragraphs

170 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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