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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take 1Y6L
I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to attend the class in which I am taking the course Fintech at your institution because of my job that I have been working for a company for two years. I am very disappointed with the decision I made but I have recently got a new project and the work timings are changed from 9 am to 6 pm to 2 pm to 11 pm. The class will start at 6 pm so I cannot continue the course. I request you to change my course timings from evening to morning. It would be very helpful to me if you could help me. Because both are very important to me. I have joined the course very recently. I find it is very interesting and helpful to my career. I look forward to receiving your response. yours faithfully, vaddireddy pavani.
I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to attend the
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class
in which I am taking the course Fintech at your institution
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because
of my job that I have been working for a
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company
for two years.

I am
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very
disappointed with the decision I made
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but
I have recently
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got
a new project and the work timings are
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changed
from 9 am to 6 pm to 2 pm to 11 pm. The
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class
will
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start
at 6 pm
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so
I cannot continue the course.

I request you to
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change
my course timings from evening to morning. It would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
helpful to me if you could
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help
me.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
both are
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very
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important
to me. I have
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joined
the course
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very
recently. I find it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
interesting and helpful to my career.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to receiving your response.

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yours
faithfully
,
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vaddireddy
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pavani
.

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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