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During A Recent Plane Journey, You Sat Next To A Businessman Who Owns A Chain Of Restaurants.

During A Recent Plane Journey, You Sat Next To A Businessman Who Owns A Chain Of Restaurants. 9r83n
Dear XYZ, I am writing this letter to you regarding a potential job opportunity in your restaurant. Let me introduce myself. I am ABC, and we met on the flight from Toronto to Dubai on 26th March. I got lucky to get a chance to sit next to you during the wonderful journey. We had a great talk and found out that we even had the same interest in the business. I am glad that you gave your business card and contact for future reference. I show an advertisement that one of your restaurants is going to be open soon in Toronto-downtown. Currently, I am trying to enhance my skills and looking for a manager position in the food chain market. I have rich experience as an assistant manager in Canada's one of the most reputed restaurants for the last 10 years and great customer connections. Hence, I would be a perfect candidate for your restaurant. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely ABC
Dear XYZ,

I am writing this letter to you regarding a potential job opportunity in your restaurant.

Let
me introduce myself. I am ABC, and we met on the flight from Toronto to Dubai on 26th March. I
got
lucky to
get
a chance to sit
next
to you during the wonderful journey. We had a great talk and found out that we even had the same interest in the business.

I am glad that you gave your business card and contact for future reference. I
show
an advertisement that one of your restaurants is going to be open
soon
in Toronto-downtown.
Currently
, I am trying to enhance my
skills
and looking for a manager position in the food chain market.

I have rich experience as an assistant manager in Canada's one of the most reputed restaurants for the last 10 years and great customer connections.
Hence
, I would be a perfect candidate for your restaurant.

Look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely


ABC
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IELTS letter During A Recent Plane Journey, You Sat Next To A Businessman Who Owns A Chain Of Restaurants.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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