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điều ước giáng sinh cùng wider world

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Hello everyone, I'm Thuy Anh, 13 years old, studying at Binh Phu Secondary School. Christmas is a holiday on December 25 that celebrates the birth of Jesus Christ. Coming to Christmas, people often wish for good things or give good things to others. At this point, I just want to wish everyone around me to always be happy, prosperous, prosperous, healthy and also wish for myself to study well and do many useful things for everyone. In short, I wish everyone a very Merry Christmas with the one they love
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Secondary School. Christmas is a holiday on December 25 that celebrates the birth of Jesus Christ. Coming to Christmas,
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things to others. At this point, I
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around me to always be happy, prosperous, prosperous, healthy and
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for myself to study well and do
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useful things for
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. In short, I
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Merry Christmas with the one they
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IELTS letter điều ước giáng sinh cùng wider world

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  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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