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You read advertisement about course. Write a letter to the manager.

You read advertisement about course. Write a letter to the manager. peP8a
Dear Sir, I am writing to the position of weekend job as a tour guide, as advertised in last week's Guardian newspaper on 9 th December. As outlined in my CV which I have enclosed, I graduated from the University of Foreign Languages in 2004 in Tashkent. After graduating the Universty, I worked as a foreign language teacher at local school for 3 years. In those years I obtained some certificates which depend on my career like CEFR, TFT. Currently, I work at Language Learning Centre as a mentor. Furthermore, I have been learning history as my hobby since my school times. As far as I know, this position requires background knowledge about history. So, I believe that I am a well-suited candidate for the outlined position. I enclised my CV, photograph, phone number and I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ann Heathway.
Dear Sir,

I am writing to the position of weekend job as a tour guide, as advertised in last week's Guardian newspaper on
Did you mean "9th"?
9 th
December.

As outlined in my CV which I have enclosed, I graduated from the University of Foreign Languages in 2004 in Tashkent.

After graduating the
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Universty
, I worked as a foreign language teacher at local school for 3 years. In those years I obtained
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some
certificates which depend on my career like CEFR, TFT.

Currently
, I work at Language Learning
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Centre
as a mentor.

Furthermore
, I have been learning history as my hobby since my school times. As far as I know, this position requires background knowledge about history.

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So
, I believe that I am a well-suited candidate for the outlined position.

I
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enclised
my CV, photograph, phone number and I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ann
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Heathway
.
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IELTS letter You read advertisement about course. Write a letter to the manager.

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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