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, Dear, I am writing this email to formally inform you of my resignation from sales executive. The last working date shall be January 14th. I'd like to express my gratitude to the company for providing me with favorable working conditions. It has been a great privilege and honor working with friendly colleagues in a pleasant working environment, at the same time, I am grateful for my manager’s support. I have gained valuable experience in dealing with customers and promoting products which I believe will help me further advance in my career. Furthermore, by regularly visiting our customers I have expanded my business network and gained a better understanding of their needs and expectations. Unfortunately, all good things must come to an end, I have recently received a great offer from Unilever for a position as a Sales Manager which I accepted. It was an extremely tough decision to make as I have been associated with your company for more than three years. Because we've worked together for a long time, I'd like to request a reference letter from you, which I'll need when I start my new job. If you could write a reference letter for me that covered my responsibilities and accomplishments during my employment, I would be grateful. Thank you for your support over the past three years. I look forward to your response Yours sincerely, Linh

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 date shall be January 14th.

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 with friendly colleagues in a pleasant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
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 environment, at the same time, I am grateful for my manager’s support. I have gained valuable experience in dealing with customers and promoting products which I believe will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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 my new job. If you could write a reference letter for me that covered my responsibilities and accomplishments during my employment, I would be grateful.

Thank you for your support over the past three years. I look forward to your response

Yours sincerely
,

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