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write a letter to your friend about learning Vietnamese

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Dear Jack, Many thanks for your email. I hope that you are well. I’m glad to know that you will come to study in Hanoi. That’s great if you are a student at Vietnam National University. It’s one of the most university in Hanoi. About learning Vietnamese, I think that you have so many activities to improve it. Playing sports and finding a part-time job also are useful choices. If I were you, I would play some sports with many Vietnam people such as football, billiards, badminton and so on. Besides, you can participate some events of sport in the park or museum. This will help you to understand human’s life in Vietnam and increase your Vietnamese vocabulary. For part-time job, there are lots of choices for you. For example, you can work as employment in café, bookstore. In addition, you’ll try teaching English for children that so interested. Let’s do it. I hope to see you in Hanoi soon. Please let me know if you need anything else. Look forward to seeing you again,
Dear Jack,

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thanks for your email. I hope that you are well. I’m glad to know that you will
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to study in Hanoi.

That’s great if you are a student at Vietnam National University. It’s one of the most university in Hanoi. About learning Vietnamese, I
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think
that you have
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activities to
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improve
it. Playing sports and finding a part-time job
also
are useful choices. If I were you, I would play
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some
sports with
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Vietnam
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people
such as football, billiards, badminton and
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so
on.
Besides
, you can participate
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some
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events
of sport in the park or museum. This will
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help
you to understand human’s life in Vietnam and increase your Vietnamese vocabulary.

For part-time job, there are lots of choices for you.
For example
, you can work as employment in café, bookstore.
In addition
, you’ll try teaching English for children that
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so
interested.
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’s do it.

I hope to
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see
you in Hanoi
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.
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me know if you need anything else.

Look forward to seeing you again,
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend about learning Vietnamese

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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