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An apologing letter for being late.

An apologing letter for being late. EqjQQ
Dear Mr Paul, I am writing to apologize to you about being late last Monday's meeting with business owners which is particularly crucial for me and my job. This was very difficult for me to be able to get you aware of my position or unexpected situation which I was stuck at the traffic with crowded buses as well as people. Then I phoned to the company's secretary to explain my situation nevertheless no one could answer my calls. In addition to this I sent a voice message to apologize for being so late for an important meeting as soon as possible. To sum up I am sincerely sorry for being late and this kind of matter will not be repeated again I promise. In the nearer future I will surely participate another meeting and be punctual on time and consider all kinds of possible matters. Yours faithfully, Mrs Smith.
Dear Mr Paul, I am writing to apologize to you about being late last Monday's meeting with business owners which is
particularly
crucial for me and my job. This was
very
difficult for me to be able to
get
you aware of my position or unexpected situation which I
was stuck
at the traffic with crowded buses
as well
as
people
. Then I phoned to the
company
's secretary to
explain
my situation
nevertheless
no one could answer my calls.
In addition
to this I
sent
a voice message to apologize for being
so
late for an
important
meeting as
soon
as possible. To sum up I am
sincerely
sorry for being late and this kind of matter will not be
repeated again
I promise. In the nearer future I will
surely
participate another meeting and be punctual on time and consider all kinds of possible matters. Yours
faithfully
, Mrs Smith.
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IELTS letter An apologing letter for being late.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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