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Dear Sara, Hi, how are you? Hope you're doing well and your family is fine. I’m writing to apologize for not being at your wedding party next week. I know that’s very important occasion and we are making plans for the end of party exactly when you will throw bouquet of flowers. I can’t believe I missed it and I’m completely blame. Unfortunately, there was a mix-up with my phone’s calendar. When I added the event, I accidentally set the date for the week ahead so I thought the party was this Friday. In fact, when you were calling me, I was in bathroom and my phone was silent. then I forgot to check it again and I didn’t get your messages until this morning. Anyway, I suggest we meet on the weekend at Tochal. I would like to invite you for breakfast. This breakfast would be special as I will be cooking myself. Please let me know your availability. See you soon, Shima

Dear Sara,

Hi, how are you? Hope you're doing well and your family is fine.

I’m writing to apologize for not being at your wedding party next
 week. I know that’s This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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important
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occasion and
 we are making plans for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of party exactly when you will throw bouquet of flowers. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can’t believe I missed it and I’m completely blame.

Unfortunately, there was a mix-up with my phone’s calendar. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
, I accidentally
 set the date for the week ahead This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 the party was this Friday. In fact, when you were calling me, I was in bathroom and my phone was silent. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
 I forgot to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 it again and I didn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 your messages until this morning.

Anyway, I suggest we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 on the weekend at Possible spelling mistake found.LocalSocialTotalVocalFocalTonal
Tochal
. I would like to invite you for breakfast. This breakfast would be special as I will be cooking myself. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know your availability.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
,

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