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Dear Sara, Hi, how are you? Hope you're doing well and your family is fine. I’m writing to apologize for not being at your wedding party next week. I know that’s very important occasion and we are making plans for the end of party exactly when you will throw bouquet of flowers. I can’t believe I missed it and I’m completely blame. Unfortunately, there was a mix-up with my phone’s calendar. When I added the event, I accidentally set the date for the week ahead so I thought the party was this Friday. In fact, when you were calling me, I was in bathroom and my phone was silent. then I forgot to check it again and I didn’t get your messages until this morning. Anyway, I suggest we meet on the weekend at Tochal. I would like to invite you for breakfast. This breakfast would be special as I will be cooking myself. Please let me know your availability. See you soon, Shima
Dear Sara,

Hi, how are you? Hope you're doing well and your family is fine.

I’m writing to apologize for not being at your wedding party
next
week. I know that’s
very
important
occasion and
we are making plans for the
end
of party exactly when you will throw bouquet of flowers.
I
can’t believe I missed it and I’m completely blame.

Unfortunately, there was a mix-up with my phone’s calendar. When I
added
the
event
, I
accidentally
set the date for the week ahead
so
I
thought
the party was this Friday. In fact, when you were calling me, I was in bathroom and my phone was silent.
then
I forgot to
check
it again and I didn’t
get
your messages until this morning.

Anyway, I suggest we
meet
on the weekend at
Tochal
. I would like to invite you for breakfast. This breakfast would be special as I will be cooking myself.
Please
let
me know your availability.

See
you
soon
,

Shima
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IELTS letter you have arranged to meet a friend next week but you have realised that you will not be able to go

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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