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Write a letter to your friend, In your letter, thank him for the invitation, explain why you cannot come and ask him about other times to visit

Write a letter to your friend, In your letter, thank him for the invitation, explain why you cannot come and ask him about other times to visit 6KV13
Dear Kim, Thank you so much for your invitation. It's really a generous offer to put me up at your place in Tokyo. I'd really like to come and it's very kind of you but unfortunately I won't be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule. I just started a new teaching job. and I have been working around the clock. It is so intense, I don't mean to complain; I've been enjoying it immensely and the school I'm working at is actually our old high school, which has been a lot of fun. Do you remember Mrs. Brown? She is my supervisor now. Could you let me know of another time I can visit? Because of the school holidays I will be free in the new year and I will also be free in winter so if you are available then, I would certainly love to escape the cold to visit you. I can't wait to hear from you. Your friend, Joe
Dear Kim, Thank you
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much for your invitation. It's
really
a generous offer to put me up at your place in Tokyo. I'd
really
like to
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come
and it's
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very
kind of you
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but
unfortunately I won't be able to
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make
it due to my hectic work schedule. I
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just
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started
a new teaching job.
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and
I have been working around the clock. It is
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so
intense, I don't mean to complain; I've been enjoying it
immensely
and the school I'm working at is actually our
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old
high school, which has been
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a lot of
fun. Do you remember Mrs. Brown? She is my supervisor
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now
. Could you
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let
me know of another time I can visit?
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Because
of the school holidays I will be free in the new year and I will
also
be free in winter
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so
if you are available then, I would
certainly
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love
to escape the
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cold
to visit you. I can't wait to hear from you.

Your friend, Joe
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend, In your letter, thank him for the invitation, explain why you cannot come and ask him about other times to visit

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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