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I am writing to give you updates about my internship in which I have been enrolled for three weeks now in an international company called "Building For The Future".

I am writing to give you updates about my internship in which I have been enrolled for three weeks now in an international company called "Building For The Future". kgqB2

Dear Mr Paul, I am writing to give you updates about my internship in which I have been enrolled for three weeks now in an international company called "Building For The Future". First of all, I would like to appreciate you for the help and the support you have given us throughout the course. Also I would like to thank you for suggesting me to take part of such an amazing team with whom I feel at ease. Without your intervention, I probably wouldn't be able to find a place to do my training. Since I have been here, I have acquired a valuable experience which will definitely help me to find a job. In fact, we are currently working on the construction of a multi-storey building nearby the city council and I am in charge of the supervision of the construction staff and the advancement of the project. Indeed, I have to deliver a weekly overview to the manager about the difficulty encountered on the site anf what what should be done to improve the safty there. Due to my perseverance and my motivation, the company manager promised to offer me a job after graduation. So, if everything go as expected and successfully passed the exams, I may accept his offer and work here. Thank you again for you support. Yours sincerely,

Dear Mr Paul,

I am writing to give you updates about my internship in which I have been enrolled
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now
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, I would like to appreciate you for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 and the support you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 us throughout the course. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
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take part
 of such an amazing team with whom I feel at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
. Without your intervention, I probably
 wouldn't be able to find a place to do my training.

Since I have been here, I have acquired a valuable experience which will definitely In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?help me find
help me to find
 a job. In fact, we are currently
 working on the construction of a Possible spelling mistake found.multistory
multi-storey
 building nearby the city Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).council, and
council and
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, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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anf
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what what
 should be done
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improve
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safty
 there.

Due to my perseverance and my motivation, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 manager promised to offer me a job after graduation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, if everything go as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 and successfully
 passed the exams, I may accept his offer and work here.

Thank you again for you support.

Yours sincerely
, 