Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Dear Mr Robinson, My name is Selma Kaci, and I am one of your students at the medical sciences university. Today, I am writing to express my heartfelt thankfulness for your support during my recent training and to let you know about my future perspectives

Dear Mr Robinson, My name is Selma Kaci, and I am one of your students at the medical sciences university. Today, I am writing to express my heartfelt thankfulness for your support during my recent training and to let you know about my future perspectives Edr8D
Dear Mr Robinson, My name is Selma Kaci, and I am one of your students at the medical sciences university. Today, I am writing to express my heartfelt thankfulness for your support during my recent training and to let you know about my future perspectives. Firstly, I would like to thank you for the opportunity you gave me to do a three-month-internship in one of the most famous hospitals of the country. Being in touch with such eminent doctors pushed my skills to the next level. Approaching patients and learning about the latest trends in terms of diagnosis for some critical pathologies. Honestly, It was a dream that I fulfilled and I will be eternally grateful for you for that. During this period, I was asked to start taking the history of the disease through a long conversation with each patient. Besides, the doctors supervised me while performing x-rays as well as ultrasound which should be of high precision. The most important dutie I had towards my patients was to appease their pain and suffering using the appropriate psychological approach and medical treatments. Once graduate, I am planning for pursuing my studies overseas, in order to experience a new medical practice. Afterwards, I will return back to my country with great qualifications in terms of surgery and oncology which are not widely developed locally. I am convinced that my fellow citizens will be proud of me in the next few years, as I will be able to tackle lots of fatal deseases that continue to claim people's lives. I would like to thank you for the umpteenth time for your availability and dedication for helping me throughout the internship period. Yours sincerely, Selma Kaci.
Dear Mr Robinson,

My name is Selma
Kaci
, and I am one of your students at the medical
sciences
university.
Today
, I am writing to express my heartfelt thankfulness for your support during my recent training and to
let
you know about my future perspectives.

Firstly
, I would like to thank you for the opportunity you gave me to do a three-month-internship in one of the most
famous
hospitals of the country. Being in touch with such eminent doctors pushed my
skills
to the
next
level. Approaching patients and learning about the latest trends in terms of diagnosis for
some
critical pathologies.
Honestly
, It was a dream that I fulfilled and I will be
eternally
grateful for you for that.

During this period, I
was asked
to
start
taking the history of the disease through a long conversation with each patient.
Besides
, the doctors supervised me while performing x-rays
as well
as ultrasound which should be of high precision. The most
important
dutie
I had towards my patients was to appease their pain and suffering using the appropriate psychological approach and medical treatments.

Once graduate, I am planning for pursuing my studies overseas, in order to experience a new medical practice. Afterwards, I will
return back
to my country with great qualifications in terms of surgery and oncology which are not
widely
developed
locally
. I
am convinced
that my fellow citizens will be proud of me in the
next
few years, as I will be able to tackle lots of fatal
deseases
that continue to claim
people
's
lives
.

I would like to thank you for the umpteenth time for your availability and dedication for helping me throughout the internship period.

Yours
sincerely
,

Selma
Kaci
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter Dear Mr Robinson, My name is Selma Kaci, and I am one of your students at the medical sciences university. Today, I am writing to express my heartfelt thankfulness for your support during my recent training and to let you know about my future perspectives

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts