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Write a letter to the secretary of an institute to accept an invitation to give a talk about your country at an American university. Include: • Acceptance and a possible date • What you will say in the talk • Equipment you will need

Write a letter to the secretary of an institute to accept an invitation to give a talk about your country at an American university. Include: • Acceptance and a possible date • What you will say in the talk • Equipment you will need Wq9bq
Dear Mr. Smith, Thank you so much for your invitation. It would be an honor for me to deliver a speech about my home country, Iran, in this prestigious seat of learning. I believe, the 21st of March would be perfect timing, since it coincides with the Persian new year’s eve. Since the audience might be familiar with neither the demographic nor the geographical features of this land, I will start form the characteristic of the location and its people. Then, I will continue on the various cultures and traditions of local people, which definitely will raise interest among the younger generation in the crowd. Finally, I will show some of the touristic sites and leisure activities that can be planned in my country. To perfect the showcasing of the above-mentioned, I will be in need of a video projector and two high quality speakers. Accessing a laser pointer can be beneficial as well if could be provided. I am going to bring my own laptop, therefore, there would be no need to supply it. Please let me know if any other information is needed or any possible eventualities about the venue. I am Looking forward to this event, Yours faithfully,
Dear Mr. Smith,

Thank you
so
much for your invitation. It would be an honor for me to deliver a speech about my home country, Iran, in this prestigious seat of learning. I believe, the 21st of March would be perfect timing, since it coincides with the Persian
new year’s eve
.

Since the audience might be familiar with neither the demographic nor the geographical features of this land, I will
start
form the characteristic of the location and its
people
. Then, I will continue on the various cultures and traditions of local
people
, which definitely will raise interest among the younger generation in the crowd.
Finally
, I will
show
some of the
touristic sites and leisure activities that can
be planned
in my country.

To perfect the showcasing of the above-mentioned, I will be in need of a video projector and two high quality speakers. Accessing a laser pointer can be beneficial
as well
if could
be provided
. I am going to bring my
own
laptop,
therefore
, there would be no need to supply it.

Please
let
me know if any other information
is needed
or any possible eventualities about the venue.

I am Looking forward to this
event
,

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the secretary of an institute to accept an invitation to give a talk about your country at an American university. Include: • Acceptance and a possible date • What you will say in the talk • Equipment you will need

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
201 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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