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Describe the training course say how it will help improve you performance . Explain how much items you need off end ask you permission .

Describe the training course say how it will help improve you performance. Explain how much items you need off end ask you permission. VYDYA
Dear sir/medam I am writing to request. computer courses is being done here. I request to you for computer courses. first, I think this course will we help improve my skills. My job is very critical for learning about for internet. I need advanced learning and improved computer skills. How to use and communication. In addition, My job is trainee teacher in army school. I teach student because i want learn more. I think it will help learn something. On the other hand, i need some help for learning. I should some books paper pen and laptop because after i will done my home work. my class is start this week please give me a leave twince a week. I need for learning. Let me know what you think of my idea. Soniya
Dear sir/
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medam
I am writing to request.
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computer
courses is
being done
here. I request to you for computer courses.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
first
, I
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think
this course will we
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help
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improve
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. My job is
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very
critical for
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learning
about for internet. I need advanced
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learning
and
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improved
computer
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skills
. How to
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use
and communication.
In addition
, My job is trainee teacher in army school. I teach student
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because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
Probably a preposition is missing after 'want'.
want learn
more. I
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think
it will
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help
learn something.
On the other hand
,
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i
need
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some
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help
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
. I should
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some
books paper pen and laptop
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because
after
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
Did you mean "do" or "be done"?
done
my home work.
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my
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class
is
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start
this week
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please
give me a
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leave
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twince
a week. I need for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
.
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Let
me know what you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Soniya

IELTS letter Describe the training course say how it will help improve you performance. Explain how much items you need off end ask you permission.

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