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Describe the training course say how it will help improve you performance . Explain how much items you need off end ask you permission .

Describe the training course say how it will help improve you performance. Explain how much items you need off end ask you permission. VYDYA
Dear sir/medam I am writing to request. computer courses is being done here. I request to you for computer courses. first, I think this course will we help improve my skills. My job is very critical for learning about for internet. I need advanced learning and improved computer skills. How to use and communication. In addition, My job is trainee teacher in army school. I teach student because i want learn more. I think it will help learn something. On the other hand, i need some help for learning. I should some books paper pen and laptop because after i will done my home work. my class is start this week please give me a leave twince a week. I need for learning. Let me know what you think of my idea. Soniya
Dear sir/
medam
I am writing to request.
computer
courses is
being done
here. I request to you for computer courses.
first
, I
think
this course will we
help
improve
my
skills
. My job is
very
critical for
learning
about for internet. I need advanced
learning
and
improved
computer
skills
. How to
use
and communication.
In addition
, My job is trainee teacher in army school. I teach student
because
i
want learn
more. I
think
it will
help
learn something.
On the other hand
,
i
need
some
help
for
learning
. I should
some
books paper pen and laptop
because
after
i
will
done
my home work.
my
class
is
start
this week
please
give me a
leave
twince
a week. I need for
learning
.
Let
me know what you
think
of my
idea
.
Soniya
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IELTS letter Describe the training course say how it will help improve you performance. Explain how much items you need off end ask you permission.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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