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Hello teacher Gray, My name is B. You also can call me b. I am 19 years old. My strong points are flexibility and honesty. On the other hand, I also have weak points such as lack of confidence and being too sensitive. The achievement that I want from the reading course is reading like a native speaker, it's mean when I'm reading English books such as novels, textbooks, etc. I can imagine in my mind while reading. If the teacher has any advice or something that can improve my skills, please advise me. I will try hard for it. I have been reading many books before such as Economics, novels, philosophy, and others. I have been reading one books that i read and can't to continue reading the book is name " Spring Autumn Leaves ( 春 秋 茶 ) " This book has content about chinese philosophy. This book has many Chinese poems and a little bit of Chinese history. Poems in this book have already been translated but still hard to comprehend, that is the reason why I stopped reading it. I still trust this book is a really good philosophy book one Latest, I'm waiting to study with you. If have any advise, please let me know. Bew Pc1/1
Hello teacher Gray,

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. My strong points are flexibility and honesty.
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course is
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English
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books
such as novels, textbooks, etc. I can imagine in my mind while
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. If the teacher has any advice or something that can
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I have been
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Spring Autumn
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philosophy
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5 paragraphs
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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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