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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties 2Job
Dear Jack, Hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter to our previous conversation where you have acknowledged to take care of my house and pet. I am leaving for India on Tuesday, 23rd of November. In case if you need my attention on any issues while I am not in town you can certainly call me at 9876354421. Kermit, my dog. He is affectionate and super active in nature so you will have to take him for a walk twice a day and also play with him. Kermit usually eats dog food. I would like to highlight a few homely tasks like cleaning the desk since it is close to the window, it is full of dust by end of the day. Also, fill in the water tank so you do have issue when there is no supply. Hope you have good time with Kermit. Love, Sid
Dear Jack,

Hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter to our previous conversation where you have acknowledged to take care of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and pet.

I am leaving for India on Tuesday, 23rd of November. In case if you need my attention on any issues while I am not in town you can
certainly
call me at 9876354421. Kermit, my dog. He is affectionate and super active in nature
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take him for a walk twice a day and
also
play with him. Kermit
usually
eats dog food.

I would like to highlight a few homely tasks like cleaning the desk since it is close to the window, it is full of dust by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the day.
Also
, fill in the water tank
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you do have issue when there is no supply.

Hope you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
time with Kermit.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
, Sid
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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