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You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it. You should write at least 150 words.

You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it. lEJ9
Dear Sir/Madam I have been your customer for three years now. The purpose of writing you today is to bring your attention on faulty information that I received recently. I hold a current account with account number123456 at your bank. Last week I received a letter from your side mentioning that my account had been overdrawn by $240 hence a charge of $70 will be deducted from my account to compentiate that. Surprisingly, I haven't used my Cheques or Debit card for some time now and my balances and withdraw limits are far beyond mentioned overdraw to be a possibility. Without further delay, I had a visit to my nearest branch at ABB street however a teller informed me about his limitation to act on such complains while suggesting me to write to the head office. Therefore, I would like to bring your attention to the issue and anticipate prompt action from your end. Further, I would also like to request for a confirmation letter with updated bank statement authenticating that there was no deductions from my account. Yours faithfully, Pb
Dear Sir/Madam

I have been your customer for three years
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now
. The purpose of writing you
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today
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is


to bring your attention on faulty information that I received recently.

I hold a
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current
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account
with
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account
number123456 at your bank.
‘last week’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
Last week
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I


received a letter from your side mentioning that my
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account
had been overdrawn

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by
$240
hence
a charge of $70 will
be deducted
from my
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account
to
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compentiate
that.

Surprisingly
, I haven't
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used
my
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Cheques
or Debit card for
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some
time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and my

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balances
and withdraw limits are far beyond mentioned overdraw to be a possibility.

Without
further
delay, I had a visit to my nearest branch at ABB street
however
a

teller informed me about his limitation to act on such complains while suggesting

me to write to the head office.

Therefore
, I would like to bring your attention to the issue and anticipate prompt

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
action
from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.
Further
, I would
also
like to request for a confirmation letter with

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
updated
bank statement authenticating that
Did you mean "there were no deductions"?
there was no deductions
from my account.

Yours
faithfully
,

Pb
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IELTS letter You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.

Letter
  American English
12 paragraphs
180 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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