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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. XQWN
Dear Mr. Smith, I am deeply sorry for the noise coming from my appartment. As you might have noticed, I have adopted a dog a few days ago. Her name is Milly, she is a 5 months old golden retrirver. She is very friendly and sweet, but unfortunately she isn't still used to the appartment yet. I am apologise for the any misconvenience or eruption Milly might have caused. I will try my best to keep a better control on her night howling, but I do hope you excuse her barking at strangers; she is only doing her best to protect the house. I am currently in the process of training her, so hopefully it won't be long now before she quiets down. It has been proven to me that it isn't as easy as it seems to be. If i find myself unable to do it alone, I will be hiring a professional dog trainer. Mrs. Adams told me that you used to own a dog, I would appreceate any tips or advice you can give me on hpw to train her. Also feel free to pass by and and play with her if you'd like. I am sure Milly would love it. I hope you accept my appology and now better understand my situation. My sincere apologies, Salma Abdelaziz
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am
deeply
sorry for the noise coming from my
appartment
. As you might have noticed, I have adopted a dog a few days ago. Her name is
Milly
, she is a 5 months
old
golden
retrirver
. She is
very
friendly and sweet,
but
unfortunately she isn't
still
used
to the
appartment
yet
.

I am
apologise
for the any
misconvenience
or eruption
Milly
might have caused. I will try my best to
keep
a better control on her night howling,
but
I do hope you excuse her barking at strangers; she is
only
doing her best to protect the
house
.

I
am
currently
in the process of training her,
so
hopefully
it won't be long
now
before
she quiets down. It has
been proven
to me that it isn't as easy as it seems to be. If
i
find myself unable to do it alone, I will be hiring a professional dog trainer. Mrs. Adams
told
me that you
used
to
own
a dog, I would
appreceate
any tips or advice you can give me on
hpw
to train her.
Also
feel free to pass by
and and
play with her if you'd like. I am sure
Milly
would
love
it.

I hope you accept my
appology
and
now
better understand my situation.

My sincere apologies,

Salma
Abdelaziz
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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