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Describe a location that you went to with your friends.

Describe a location that you went to with your friends. gWaND

It was a day trip. Early in the morning we were at school and moved to Ha Long by coach. The road is quite long, but thanks to the entertainment activities in the car with friends, I do not feel bored. My family has been to Ha Long Bay many times but I have never been to this amusement park. Here comes the most adventurous rides and the longest roller coaster with perigon rotation. Im not a risk-averse person so I tried the scariest ride there- the roller coaster. It was truly an experience of a lifetime because I have never shouted so loudly like that. If it weren't for the queues, I'd try it again. But after that play, I sat idly on the merry-go-round for the rest of the day…. Anyway, it was a great day, I enjoyed the day to the fullest with my friends. I really hope the epidemic will pass quickly so that I have the opportunity to go to the amusement park in Ha Long again.

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