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Your organizing party to your family. Invite a friend.

Your organizing party to your family. Invite a friend. 1AR97
Dear John, I hope all are good and safe due to this pandemic. I am writing to this letter because of my sisters engagement. Case of both side parents given them to approval there marriage. So, i organize family party and it is surprise party that no one know. i would like to invite to you. actually i m very sturban person to dealing with party organize company. you can handle with this. so please come. and i arrange some events too. latterly i send location and time. so really happy if you are coming. please consider this matter. ill waiting for your reply soon. Thank you your faithfully kevin
Dear John, I hope all are
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good
and safe due to this pandemic. I am writing to this letter
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because
of my sisters engagement. Case of both side parents
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given
them to approval there marriage.
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So
,
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i
organize family party and it is surprise party that no one know.
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i
would like to invite to you.
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actually
i m
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very
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sturban
person to dealing with party organize
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company
.
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you
can handle with this.
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so
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please
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come
.
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and
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i
arrange
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some
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events
too.
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latterly
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i
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send
location and time.
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so
really
happy if you are coming.
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please
consider this matter.
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ill
waiting for your reply
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soon
. Thank you your
faithfully
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kevin
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IELTS letter Your organizing party to your family. Invite a friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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