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Write a letter to thank for the last holiday photos and invite for next holiday to my place.

Write a letter to thank for the last holiday photos and invite for next holiday to my place. G9mjw

Dear Bala, Hope you and your family safe. Two Days before I received the photos of our wonderful holiday we spent in Australia. Those photos are beautiful and recalled all the memories and I would like to thank you for that. I can still remember the bbq party and after Party celebration with nice music. I am so sorry I haven't written for so long. I was litter bit busy with my work these days because I got promoted as senior manager recently. So lot of additional work i need to take care. In addition to that I renovate my house as well. Because of that I stayed in the Airbnb House for last two month. Now my house renovation fully finished and one week before only I shifted to my house. I would like to invite you to my house for next vacation to recreate new memories. Near to my house there are is a river. I know you always like sit ner to river and listen music. Normally in my city normally for summer holidays many cultural events also will be organized by many clubs. we can attend that also. I can't wait till next holiday to meet you. I hope the till flies and summer vacations comes soon. Yours, Kumanan.

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Bala
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Hope you and your family safe.

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before
 I received the photos of our wonderful holiday we spent in Australia. Those photos are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
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 and recalled all the memories and I would like to thank you for that. I can still
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 party and after Party celebration with nice music.

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 promoted as senior manager recently. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
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before
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only
 I shifted to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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I would like to invite you to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
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 vacation to recreate new memories. Near to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 there are is a river. I know you always like sit Possible spelling mistake found.NERhernewnearnornet
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 to river and listen music. Normally
 in my city normally
 for summer holidays This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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many
 clubs. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
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I can't wait till next
 holiday to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you. I hope the till flies and summer vacations This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
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soon
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Yours,

Possible spelling mistake found.Rumanian
Kumanan
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