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Write a letter to the landlord: - Explain the situation to him -Assure him that you will pay as soon as your parents send you some money -Mention some problems there are with the flat

Write a letter to the landlord: - Explain the situation to him -Assure him that you will pay as soon as your parents send you some money -Mention some problems there are with the flat Bwk16
ear Sir/Ma'am, I am writing this letter to regretfully inform you that due to some unforeseen circumstances, I am unable to pay the next month's rent on the due date. It might get delayed by a few days. The reason for this is that my wallet got picked in a bus two days ago while I was returning home from work. Along with some money, I have lost my ATM card too, and therefore I am unable to withdraw money from my account. The bank will take a week to re-issue my card. Meanwhile, I have asked my parents to send me some cash, and as soon as it arrives, I shall pay you the rent. I would also like to take this opportunity to inform you that the geyser in my bathroom isn't functioning. Every time I try to turn it on, the switch emits a small spark, which is worrying. Also, the fan in the drawing room makes a lot of noise when turned on, and looks very flimsy when spinning. I shall be grateful if you get these things repaired at the earliest. I would again like to apologize for the delay in paying the rent to you. Please bear with me for the inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely,
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ear
Sir/Ma'am,

I am writing this letter to
regretfully
inform you that due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
unforeseen circumstances, I am unable to pay the
next
month's rent on the due date. It might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
delayed by a few days.

The reason for this is
that my wallet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
picked in a bus two days ago while I was returning home from work. Along with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
money, I have lost my ATM card too, and
therefore
I am unable to withdraw money from my account. The bank will take a week to re-issue my card. Meanwhile, I have asked my parents to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cash, and as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as it arrives, I shall pay you the rent.

I would
also
like to take this opportunity to inform you that the geyser in my bathroom isn't functioning. Every time I try to turn it on, the switch emits a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
spark, which is worrying.
Also
, the fan in the drawing room
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
noise when turned on, and looks
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
flimsy when spinning. I shall be grateful if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
these things repaired at the earliest.

I would again like to apologize for the delay in paying the rent to you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
bear with me for the inconvenience caused.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the landlord: - Explain the situation to him -Assure him that you will pay as soon as your parents send you some money -Mention some problems there are with the flat

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
211 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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