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Complain letter for the Newly bought Kitchen equipment.

Complain letter for the Newly bought Kitchen equipment. 73exY
Dear Sir/Madam, The reason I am writing this letter for the poor quality of the blender I bought two weeks before from your shop. The first malfunction I noticed the lock is not too tight. so we always need to hold it. otherwise it is make some extra noise. we haven discover another problem when try you use the blender. I put some ice-cream and milk and push the start button. it will working for a while and its got stuck suddenly. since that we cannot able to use that. I was surprised about these kind of issues in the very well known model. After this issue, I called your shop to explain about this issue and i waited around ten minutes to connect your support assistant. After i explained all my issue and he told me to wait one week to replace the blender. After 3 weeks waiting still i didn't get my new blender. Finally, after three weeks i was contacted from you shop support person. Imagine my feeling when i heard from him that i cannot received the same model which i bought, since that is not available. As a solution he offered that i have to upgrade the model to new one and that also will cost me extra 50$ and i need to wait another two weeks to received. I regret to inform you that the service we below my expectation. Therefore i expect the full refund of 200$ as soon as possible. i believe this matter deserves your urgent attention. yours faithfully, P. kumanan
Dear Sir/Madam,

The reason I am writing this letter for the poor quality of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
two
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weeks
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
from your shop.

The
first
malfunction I noticed the lock is not too tight.
Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
so
we always need to hold it.
otherwise
it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extra noise.
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we
The abbreviation is not correct. Did you mean "haven't" (straight quote) or "haven’t" (curly quote)?
haven
discover another problem when try you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
. I put
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
ice-cream and milk and push the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
button.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "work"
working
for a while and
Did you mean "it's" (="it has") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
stuck
suddenly
.
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since
that we
Did you mean "cannot be able"?
cannot able
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
that. I
was surprised
about
Did you mean "this kind" or "these kinds"?
these kind
of
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issues
in the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well known model.

After this
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issue
, I called your shop to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
about this
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issue
and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
waited around ten minutes to connect your support assistant. After
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
all my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
issue and
he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me to wait one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
to replace the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
After
3
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weeks
waiting
still
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
didn't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
my new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
.
Finally
, after three
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weeks
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was contacted
from you shop support person. Imagine my feeling when
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
heard from him that
Did you mean "I"?
i
cannot
The verb 'cannot' requires the base form of the verb: "receive"
received
the same model which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
, since
that is
not available. As a solution he offered that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
upgrade the model to new one and that
also
will cost me extra
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$50".
50$
and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
need to wait another two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weeks
Did you mean "to receive"?
to received
.

I regret to inform you that the service we below my expectation.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
the full refund of
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$200".
200$
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
believe this matter deserves your urgent attention.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
yours
faithfully
,

P.
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kumanan
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IELTS letter Complain letter for the Newly bought Kitchen equipment.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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