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describe a hobby you enjoy

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Hello teacher my name is Minh. Today I will talk about my hobby. I am a person who loves to draw. I started drawing at a very young age, one day my father bought me a set of paints, since then I have always kept to the habit of drawing every day. Whenever I have free time, I bring out paper and pencil to draw whatever I like. Sometimes those pictures will be fields full of flowers, other times I draw my favorite comic book characters. I also copy the paintings of great artists in my own style, and the artist I like to paint is leonatdo davici, his paintings are amazing and also very mysterious. it gives me a lot of curiosity. When I draw, I feel relaxed, I like the feeling of meticulously drawing every line on the paper and seeing my work being completed. that's very interesting to me. but i really hate getting paint on my clothes, then i will have to wash them by hand, sometimes those stains can't be removed on clothes it drives me crazy, it sucks.
Hello teacher my name is
Minh
.
Today
I will talk about my hobby. I am a person who
loves
to
draw
. I
started
drawing at a
very
young age, one day my father
bought
me a set of paints, since then I have always
kept
to the habit of drawing every day. Whenever I have free time, I bring out paper and pencil to
draw
whatever I like.
Sometimes
those pictures will be fields full of flowers, other times I
draw
my favorite comic book characters. I
also
copy the paintings of great artists in my
own
style, and the artist I like to paint is
leonatdo
davici
, his paintings are amazing and
also
very
mysterious.
it
gives me
a lot of
curiosity. When I
draw
, I feel relaxed, I like the feeling of
meticulously
drawing every line on the paper and seeing my work
being completed
.
that
's
very
interesting to me.
but
i
really
hate getting paint on my clothes, then
i
will
have to
wash them by hand,
sometimes
those stains can't
be removed
on clothes it drives me crazy, it sucks.

IELTS letter describe a hobby you enjoy

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
184 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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