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Hello teacher my name is Minh. Today I will talk about my hobby. I am a person who loves to draw. I started drawing at a very young age, one day my father bought me a set of paints, since then I have always kept to the habit of drawing every day. Whenever I have free time, I bring out paper and pencil to draw whatever I like. Sometimes those pictures will be fields full of flowers, other times I draw my favorite comic book characters. I also copy the paintings of great artists in my own style, and the artist I like to paint is leonatdo davici, his paintings are amazing and also very mysterious. it gives me a lot of curiosity. When I draw, I feel relaxed, I like the feeling of meticulously drawing every line on the paper and seeing my work being completed. that's very interesting to me. but i really hate getting paint on my clothes, then i will have to wash them by hand, sometimes those stains can't be removed on clothes it drives me crazy, it sucks.
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young age, one day my father
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me a set of paints, since then I have always
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to the habit of drawing every day. Whenever I have free time, I bring out paper and pencil to
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draw
whatever I like.
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those pictures will be fields full of flowers, other times I
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my favorite comic book characters. I
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own
style, and the artist I like to paint is
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leonatdo
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IELTS letter describe a hobby you enjoy

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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