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Introduce about yoursefl and your family

Introduce about yoursefl and your family b2G1X

Hellooooo, it's Vanna. I'm so sorry for I wrote this diary 2 days late because I have more subject in week and have too much deadline. Now I'll start introduce myself, my full name in Viet Nam is Vo Thi Minh Van or you can call me May because Van is same meaning May. To be honest, I was not really like Thi in my name before because I feld it didn't mordern but when I grow up both body and brain, I proud of because it was created by my parent. My sister has a 2 year old children, he naughty but also cute, they don't live with my family so sometimes they get back to visit us. I'm a third year student in Ton Duc Thang University and my major is Marketing. I start access to specialized subjects like: Marketing Research, Marketing Service, . . . wow, it's really hard and make me overwhelming, I need to find more report or research to collect information for my subjects. And of course, all of it was wrote in Enlish, I know this is the right time for me to improve my English. Sometimes I feel pressure and think I've missed out lots of things, I reget that I didn't try before. But I believe not things too late if I try, every thing will be fine if I work hard and do your best daily. Oh, I feel little boring right now, I've been stay at home about 4 or 5 months since the quaratine due to Covid, I hate Covid and hope it will disappear quickly, I wanna hang out, meet my friend then visit familiar cafe in Cao Lanh and drink favorite coffee to motivate in my life.

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