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Dear sir Sullivan. I am very interested in your advertisement in the Aprel edition of the magazine Teaching Professional and I should like to apply to be a member of your company. I am thirty eight years old and obtained a degree of bachelor at Jizzakh State of Pedagogical Institute in 2006. I feel I have many important qualifications needed for this job. I am presently working as English teacher in department at Intensive center where I have been working for four years. In addition to this, I participate in math courses. I am proactive to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting flowers and swimming. I am sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. If you would like me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a worker of your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully.

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