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Dear sir Sullivan

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Dear sir Sullivan. I am very interested in your advertisement in the Aprel edition of the magazine Teaching Professional and I should like to apply to be a member of your company. I am thirty eight years old and obtained a degree of bachelor at Jizzakh State of Pedagogical Institute in 2006. I feel I have many important qualifications needed for this job. I am presently working as English teacher in department at Intensive center where I have been working for four years. In addition to this, I participate in math courses. I am proactive to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting flowers and swimming. I am sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. If you would like me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a worker of your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully.
Dear sir Sullivan. I am
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interested in your advertisement in the
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Aprel
edition of the magazine Teaching Professional and I should like to apply to be a member of your
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company
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and obtained a degree of bachelor at
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Jizzakh
State of Pedagogical Institute in 2006.
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feel I have
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qualifications needed for this job.
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I
am
presently
working as English teacher in department at Intensive center where I have been working for four years.
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to this, I participate in math courses. I am proactive to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
. I
currently
looking for a position that will
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allow
me to develop my
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skills
and experience.
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I
enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting flowers and swimming.
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I
am sociable and I can
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get
on well with new
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people
easily
. If you
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would like
me to attend an interview, I would be able to
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come
at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a worker of your
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company
. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
. Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter Dear sir Sullivan

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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