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Against an application you had submitted in the past, you have been selected by a reputed university to attend a one year professional course related with your line of work. Write an application to your employer seeking paid leave to attend the course. In your application, write: how this course will help you as well as the company what you are prepared to do for the company in exchange whether you are open to the possibility of working part-time

Against an application you had submitted in the past, you have been selected by a reputed university to attend a one year professional course related with your line of work. Write an application to your employer seeking paid leave to attend the course. In your application, write: how this course will help you as well as the company what you are prepared to do for the company in exchange whether you are open to the possibility of working part-time Vlko6

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to let you know about my selection in the one year Advanced Computer Diploma in Saint John University. This diploma will let me learn new and updated platforms to work on the websites. Also, these skills will be beneficial for our company as well. Let me explain the whole situation. As I have been selected for the course and have got a chance to upgrade my skill set, I am thoroughly prepared to provide my services to the company by helping in updating the software to work with. Furthermore, I will be training the whole team members with the latest skills which I will be learning during the whole programme. Being a loyal employee to your company, I want to continue working with you. Also, I am really eager to join this course too. Would you kindly allow me to work on the part-time basis so as I can do both the things hand in hand. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Michael Richard

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know about my selection in the When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "one-year"one-year
one year
 Advanced Computer Diploma in Saint John University. This diploma will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me learn new and updated platforms to work on the websites. Also
, these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 will be beneficial for our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
as well
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the whole situation. As I have been selected
 for the course and have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a chance to upgrade my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 set, I am thoroughly
 prepared to provide my services to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 by helping in updating the software to work with. Furthermore
, I will be training the whole team members with the latest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 which I will be learning during the whole Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
.

Being a loyal employee to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, I want to continue working with you. Also
, I am really
 eager to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 this course too. Would you kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to work on the part-time basis This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 as I can do both the things hand in hand.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours Faithfully
,

Michael Richard