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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding the HP printer I bought from your store in Liberty street on Monday 10th of August.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding the HP printer I bought from your store in Liberty street on Monday 10th of August. Ornq7
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding the HP printer I bought from your store in Liberty street on Monday 10th of August. Although I was pleased to buy such latest model of printers, it stopped working a few days ago, which caused me a a great inconvenience since I am working from home and rely on printing work documents. You see, when I try to print a document, it shows error ‘ technical issue, contact technical support ’. I tried to troubleshoot the issue using the manual of the printer, so I have restarted the machine, verified the cables, and the cartouche, everything looks fine but I still cannot use it. I am sure you will appreciate that this is a very disturbing situation for me. Because of this problem, I had to postpone a deal with one of my customers since I can not print the required documents for signature, which affects my work considerably. I am requesting, therefore, that you kindly replace the faulty machine and cover all the shipment and installation expenses. As you see, this does not include a compensation for my inconvenience, which I am prepared to forgo if you settle this issue promptly. I look forward to receving your confirmation that all is in order. Yours faithfully, Bishoy Yousef
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing regarding the HP printer I
bought
from your store in Liberty street on Monday 10th of August. Although I was
pleased
to
buy
such latest model of printers, it
stopped
working a few days ago, which caused me
a a
great inconvenience since I am working from home and rely on printing work documents.

You
see
, when I try to print a document, it
shows
error ‘ technical issue, contact technical support ’. I tried to troubleshoot the issue using the manual of the printer,
so
I have restarted the machine, verified the cables, and the cartouche, everything looks fine
but
I
still
cannot
use
it.

I am sure you will appreciate that this is a
very
disturbing situation for me.
Because of this
problem, I had to postpone a deal with one of my customers since I can not print the required documents for signature, which affects my work
considerably
.

I am requesting,
therefore
, that you kindly replace the faulty machine and cover all the shipment and installation expenses. As you
see
, this does not include a compensation for my inconvenience, which I
am prepared
to forgo if you settle this issue
promptly
.

I look forward to
receving
your confirmation that all is in order.

Yours
faithfully
,

Bishoy
Yousef
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding the HP printer I bought from your store in Liberty street on Monday 10th of August.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
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