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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sangeetha Manoharan and I am writing this letter in regard to the work that is being done on my street, which creates problem for the residents living in my street.

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sangeetha Manoharan and I am writing this letter in regard to the work that is being done on my street, which creates problem for the residents living in my street. The road work, which is carried out in my street, became a huge impediment for the people residing in my street. work has been started on December 2020 and its more than two months there is no amelioration. Students, who are studying for their exams, are facing problems due to noise. The old aged people are also suffering for past two months because of the noise during night time. Hence, we all feel that the council should take necessary action to speed up the process and complete it as soon as possible. We also suggest that work can be carried out in the day time for two or three hours instead of night time. If the work is done in the day time, students and old aged people can be peaceful at night. we request the council to help the people in our area by addressing this issue as soon as possible. I appreciate your attention to this matter and look forward to hear from you. Regards, Sangeetha Manoharan
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is
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Sangeetha
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Manoharan and
I am writing this letter in regard to the
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work
that is
being done
on my street, which creates problem for the residents living in my street.

The road
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work
, which
is carried
out in my street, became a huge impediment for the
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people
residing in my street.
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work
has been
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started
on December 2020 and its more than two months there is no amelioration. Students, who are studying for their exams, are facing problems due to noise. The
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old
aged
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people
are
also
suffering for past two months
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because
of the noise during night
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time
.
Hence
, we all feel that the council should take necessary action to
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speed up
the process and complete it as
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soon
as possible.

We
also
suggest that
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work
can
be carried
out in the day
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time
for two or three hours
instead
of night
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time
. If the
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work
is done
in the day
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time
, students and
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old
aged
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people
can be peaceful at night.
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we
request the council to
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help
the
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people
in our area by addressing this issue as
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soon
as possible.

I appreciate your attention to this matter and look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Regards,

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Sangeetha
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Manoharan
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IELTS letter Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sangeetha Manoharan and I am writing this letter in regard to the work that is being done on my street, which creates problem for the residents living in my street.

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  American English
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203 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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