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Dear Sir / Madam, I am contacting you to organise production of new bicycle tyres because in the near future we will have exhausted existing stock levels. Further to our successful marketing campaign sales have increased considerably and we are delighted to inform you that another campaign will start in May. We are expecting a surge in demand and therefore feel it necessary to implement all precautions to avoid complications in the supply chain. With reference to the order it is important you understand the new industrial specifications as stated in the contract. We will require three boxes of the off-road heavy duty model (SE13344633), this line is new so please confirm via email or phone when the factory has started producing these. In addition, could you possibly send us samples of the raw materials to be used due to local regulations and product standards. Kind Regards Ben Worthington

Dear Sir / Madam, I am contacting you to organise production of new bicycle tyres because in the near future we will have exhausted existing stock levels. Further to our successful marketing campaign sales have increased considerably and we are delighted to inform you that another campaign will start in May. We are expecting a surge in demand and therefore feel it necessary to implement all precautions to avoid complications in the supply chain. With reference to the order it is important you understand the new industrial specifications as stated in the contract. We will require three boxes of the off-road heavy duty model (SE13344633), this line is new so please confirm via email or phone when the factory has started producing these. In addition, could you possibly send us samples of the raw materials to be used due to local regulations and product standards. Kind Regards Ben Worthington e5kKp
Dear Sir / Madam, I am contacting you to organise production of new bicycle tyres because in the near future we will have exhausted existing stock levels. Further to our successful marketing campaign sales have increased considerably and we are delighted to inform you that another campaign will start in May. We are expecting a surge in demand and therefore feel it necessary to implement all precautions to avoid complications in the supply chain. With reference to the order it is important you understand the new industrial specifications as stated in the contract. We will require three boxes of the off-road heavy duty model (SE13344633), this line is new so please confirm via email or phone when the factory has started producing these. In addition, could you possibly send us samples of the raw materials to be used due to local regulations and product standards. Kind Regards Ben Worthington
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am contacting you to
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organise
production of new bicycle
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tyres
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because
in the near future we will have exhausted existing stock levels.

Further
to our successful marketing campaign sales have increased
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considerably and
we
are delighted
to inform you that another campaign will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
in May. We are expecting a surge in demand and
therefore
feel it necessary to implement all precautions to avoid complications in the supply chain.

With reference to the order it is
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important
you understand the new industrial specifications as stated in the contract. We will require three boxes of the off-road
'heavy duty' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "heavy-duty".
heavy duty
model (SE13344633), this line is new
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so
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please
confirm via email or phone when the factory has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
producing these.
In addition
, could you
possibly
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send
us samples of the raw materials to be
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used
due to local regulations and product standards.

Kind Regards

Ben Worthington
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IELTS letter Dear Sir / Madam, I am contacting you to organise production of new bicycle tyres because in the near future we will have exhausted existing stock levels. Further to our successful marketing campaign sales have increased considerably and we are delighted to inform you that another campaign will start in May. We are expecting a surge in demand and therefore feel it necessary to implement all precautions to avoid complications in the supply chain. With reference to the order it is important you understand the new industrial specifications as stated in the contract. We will require three boxes of the off-road heavy duty model (SE13344633), this line is new so please confirm via email or phone when the factory has started producing these. In addition, could you possibly send us samples of the raw materials to be used due to local regulations and product standards. Kind Regards Ben Worthington

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