Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Letter for camping holiday

Letter for camping holiday NrbDN
Dear Shiv, I hope you and your family is healthy and doing well. I am pleased to know that you are planning for a camping vacation this summer. I am delighted to share my opinion for this holiday, which you asked earlier. Camping holiday is a fun activity. Moreover it’s a superior way to disconnect from the technology world as well as from a monotonous life. In addition to this, it will help to reconnect with nature in a quite and serene atmosphere. Outdoor space for youngster’s playing activities and the greenery in surrounding will be a helping hand to release all the stress and anxiety. I want to take your attention towards some Issues that could happen amidst the trip. Bad weather, bugs and wild animal’s presence in the night, sharing resources like bathroom, food with our trip members can be a challenge. My Paris trip with family has been canceled due to an unexpected even. As I don’t have any plans in the summer, I can come along with you for camping. It will be a great fun because it is been a long time since we have spend quality time together. Yours Sincerely, Pinky Seth
Dear Shiv,

I hope you and your family is healthy and doing well. I am
pleased
to know that you are planning for a camping vacation this summer.
I
am delighted
to share my opinion for this holiday, which you asked earlier.

Camping holiday is a fun activity.
Moreover
it’s a superior way to disconnect from the technology world
as well
as from a monotonous life.
In addition
to this, it will
help
to reconnect with nature in a quite and serene atmosphere. Outdoor space for youngster’s playing activities and the greenery in surrounding will be a helping hand to release all the
stress
and anxiety.

I want to take your attention towards
some
Issues that could happen amidst the trip.
Bad
weather, bugs and wild animal’s presence in the night, sharing resources like bathroom, food with our trip members can be a challenge.

My Paris trip with family has
been canceled
due to an unexpected even. As I don’t have any plans in the summer, I can
come
along with you for camping. It will be a great fun
because
it
is been
a long time since we have
spend
quality time together.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Pinky Seth
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter Letter for camping holiday

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: