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Complaint letter about washing machine I bought

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Dear sirOn October 10, 2020, I purchased a washing machine (Samsung G-600) from your company. A few weeks ago, I found that while working it turned to only one side. A technician of your factory tried to fix it but failed and I asked you to change it for a new one. Now I'm afraid I have to ask you to change it again. This one turns to both sides all right, but it entangles the clothes so seriously that when it automatically begins to spin the water out, the machine would often shake madly and stop by itself. In the instruction booklet you haven't mentioned this defect, neither have you told the user how to solve the problem. I'm quite annoyed by the fact that sometimes when I came back from work to take the clothes to dry, they were still unwashed. Please change a new one that doesn't entangle the clothes. I hope you will resolve it for our satisfaction. Yours faithfullyUtkir Arzibayev
Dear
sirOn
October 10, 2020, I
purchased
a washing machine (Samsung G-600) from your
company
. A few weeks ago, I found that while working it turned to
only
one side. A technician of your factory tried to
fix
it
but
failed and I asked you to
change
it for a new one.
Now
I'm afraid I
have to
ask you to
change
it again. This one turns to both sides all right,
but
it entangles the clothes
so
seriously
that when it
automatically
begins
to spin the water out, the machine would
often
shake
madly
and
stop
by itself. In the instruction booklet you haven't mentioned this defect, neither have you
told
the user how to solve the problem. I'm quite annoyed by the fact that
sometimes
when I came back from work to take the clothes to dry, they were
still
unwashed.
Please
change
a new one that doesn't entangle the clothes. I hope you will resolve it for our satisfaction. Yours
faithfullyUtkir
Arzibayev
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IELTS letter Complaint letter about washing machine I bought

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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