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Write a letter to sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about it. Write what exactly wrong with their service. What happened after you complained the first time. What you want to club to do after your letter.

Write a letter to sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about it. Write what exactly wrong with their service. What happened after you complained the first time. What you want to club to do after your letter. PVKnp
Dear sirI am writing this letter to you to grab your attention towards the poor services provided by your club, regarding which I had earlier inform you in previous letter. The problem associated with the club, face by many of the members, is the quality of food. Nutritious diet is essential for the health of any sportsman, which is carelessly treated by the club. As I mentioned earlier that I have reported against the matter last month, still not any effective measures are taken by the head representative of club, as he assured to solve the problem personally. In this letter, I would like to request the management to pay their attention to the concept and consider it major fault, as it is a matter of health of sportsmen. I hope you will take immediate action in favour of trouble. Yours sincerelyAnnu
Dear
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writing this letter to you to grab your attention towards the poor services provided by your
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club
, regarding which I had earlier
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inform
you in previous letter. The problem associated with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
, face by
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many
of the members, is the quality of food. Nutritious diet is essential for the health of any sportsman, which is
carelessly
treated by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
. As I mentioned earlier that I have reported against the matter last month,
still
not any effective measures
are taken
by the head representative of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
, as he assured to solve the problem
personally
. In this letter, I would like to request the management to pay their attention to the concept and consider it major fault, as it is a matter of health of sportsmen. I hope you will take immediate action in
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favour
of trouble. Yours
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sincerelyAnnu
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IELTS letter Write a letter to sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about it. Write what exactly wrong with their service. What happened after you complained the first time. What you want to club to do after your letter.

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