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Dear Sir/ Ma'am This is to bring to your kind notice, I came across an information about a new shopping mall which will be constructed in our block, through the monthly copy that I receive of the yellow pages.

Dear Sir/ Ma'am This is to bring to your kind notice, I came across an information about a new shopping mall which will be constructed in our block, through the monthly copy that I receive of the yellow pages. The construction will begin in October post Diwali and this news has brought with it great enthusiasm and the residents of Sushant Lok are enthralled to know about the upcoming project. I have been living in this sector for 18 years and to buy any branded clothes, or household appliances I had to travel to Delhi as we didn't have any shopping center nearby and also which had all the brands, having this shopping center in our vicinity will be saving our time that we traveled to far of places, big brands will have their stores and will also include eateries and will have movie facility too. A great place to be with family and friends over weekends. I am writing to request you to share the information on in detail with us as there are a few members of our society who wish to book a shop and who intend to invest in this project. I am also keen to take a shop on lease and start a new venture. Looking forward to hear from you soon Thanking you Shikha Jain
Dear Sir/ Ma'am

This is to bring to your kind notice, I came across an information about a new shopping mall which will
be constructed
in our block, through the monthly copy that I receive of the yellow pages.

The construction will
begin
in October post Diwali and this news has brought with it great enthusiasm and the residents of Sushant
Lok
are enthralled
to know about the upcoming project.

I have been living in this sector for 18 years and to
buy
any branded clothes, or household appliances I had to travel to Delhi as we didn't have any shopping center nearby and
also
which had all the brands, having this shopping center in our vicinity will be saving our time that we traveled to
far of
places,
big
brands will have their stores and will
also
include eateries and will have movie facility too. A great place to be with family and friends over weekends.

I am writing to request you to share the information on in detail with us as there are a few members of our society who wish to book a shop and who intend to invest in this project. I am
also
keen to take a shop on lease and
start
a new venture.

Looking forward
to hear
from you
soon


Thanking you

Shikha
Jain
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IELTS letter Dear Sir/ Ma'am This is to bring to your kind notice, I came across an information about a new shopping mall which will be constructed in our block, through the monthly copy that I receive of the yellow pages.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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