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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to voice out some concerns I have over the construction of a shopping plaza which is located nearby 19th East Street right next to the passport office. Last night around 9: 00 pm I was driving to get some groceries when I read a banner announcing the initiation of construction on the 14th of August. Keeping in mind that this is a residential area, I would like to know if you have a permit for a commercial construction over here. This concern comes out of the fact that we have limited parking space in the area for residents and post-construction we may have to suffer because of the shopping complex. Moreover, this will be a source for major noise pollution throughout the day. Since there are no commercial buildings otherwise, this can be a source of disturbance for all of us. I would like to know more about your plan specifically when it comes to parking and with regards to operational timings of the mall. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Khizer Nawaz
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to voice out
some
concerns I have over the construction of a shopping plaza which
is located
nearby 19th East Street right
next
to the passport office. Last night around 9: 00 pm I was driving to
get
some
groceries when I read a banner announcing the initiation of construction on the 14th of August.

Keeping in mind that this is a residential area, I would like to know if you have a permit for a commercial construction over here. This concern
comes
out of the fact that we have limited parking space in the area for residents and post-construction we may
have to
suffer
because
of the shopping complex.
Moreover
, this will be a source for major noise pollution throughout the day. Since there are no commercial buildings
otherwise
, this can be a source of disturbance for all of us.

I would like to know more about your plan
specifically
when it
comes
to parking and
with regards to
operational timings of the mall.

Looking forward
to hear
from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Khizer
Nawaz
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IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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